Some Fast Love

Brrszt, brszzt. It vibrates.
"I love you too" his text says
Oh dear...calm down, heart!

Then it went quiet...
Minutes, hours and days passed.
He's with her again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Pettit Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 12:12 AM
Nice write for a double senryu.
Onclaud Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 11:19 PM
nice to see you again, celine... a bittersweet, fine write!... huggs!
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