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Whenever a papery butterfly alights on a sweet scented bloom, a rainbow arcs over the desert, and there's a smile on the face of the moon When the tiger bee sips from the chalice of a perfectly formed daffodil, spring instantly turns into summer, and the sea becomes perfectly still When the gentle dove glides over rivers that mirror his wings like a twin, the rattle of guns promptly ceases, and real peace can surely begin

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Date: 8/8/2014 11:57:00 AM
I do not believe in Peace for humans Kaye, however, I do admire and applaud the sensuous beauty of your novel symbolism. The Earth is a violent ecosystem, and humans are not meant for Peace. That all being axiomated, life is truly beautiful in all It's diverse ways, thank Deity. I love your respect for Nature's beauties Kaye. J.A.B.
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Kaye Locke
Date: 8/8/2014 12:30:00 PM
Thanks Justin. As the poem suggests, I doubt peace for all will come any day soon, but we live in hope.
Date: 8/7/2014 11:07:00 AM
wonderful write Kaye,a peaceful rhyming flow,with a great message
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Kaye Locke
Date: 8/7/2014 11:09:00 AM
Many thanks Richard, so glad you enjoyed it. Best wishes
Date: 8/4/2014 2:59:00 PM
Thanks Kaye. What a delightful poem! Beautiful rhyme and imagery. I really enjoyed it.
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Kaye Locke
Date: 8/7/2014 11:08:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words. Best wishes