Some Are Otherwise

From horizon to zenith's point and then to Crimson dusk he moved

While I kept watching leaves turning hues which now swim on blue water


(Two lines poetry challenge) 
22nd September, 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Buhagiar Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 10:40 PM
I do not recognise this contest but I'm sure you could not get a place. Why did you not date the poem? All contests must be dated. Which is a pity for you wrote a great two liner.
Zahid Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 2:29 AM
I added date later... Thanks to my insta page
Fenn Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 10:48 AM
Beautiful imagery .
Zahid Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 10:49 AM
Thanks Jenn
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