Sombrero Man

A channel of warm coastal breeze
and sun this afternoon lights up
the patio deck on forest hillside.

A dozen tiny flies now congregate
mid-air beneath the redwood limbs
nearby, and here the dance begins.

Clay Sombrero Man on patio delights
in all the revelry. The flies now circling,
dive and dance, a flit and flirt.

Patio Man wonders at the grace
of this tiny troupe of dancing flies,
spiraling, then vanishing in shadow.

The tiny acrobats have gone.
They've left our Clay Sombrero Man
to muse the why of things --

the where of things,
the feet and wings of flies --
the flies of wing and dance.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Empress Avatar
April 18, 2026 at 6:18 AM
I cant get over the beautiful and soulful way youv phrased lines throughout here, especially “ the where of things, the feet and wings of flies -- the flies of wing and dance.” My heart sighed and appreciated every word woven here in such a way that moves readers! A fave this is! Pleasure reading ~ Sending you light always
Harp Avatar
April 18, 2026 at 11:55 AM
Thank you so much, Empress, for appreciating my poem. Hugs.
Crandall Avatar
April 16, 2026 at 6:31 PM
A perfect painting of a pleasant poetic patio picture, of pondering, pottery Sombrero Man, and the diving flies of wing and dance.
Harp Avatar
April 16, 2026 at 7:58 PM
Thank you, David, for appreciating my poem. I had fun with this one.
Kendrick Avatar
April 16, 2026 at 5:58 AM
I like this one. Amazing how the insects come out at night and do love the light plus they love to bite me. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
Harp Avatar
April 16, 2026 at 7:56 PM
Thank you so much, Sara. I had a lot of fun with this one.
Wolf Avatar
April 14, 2026 at 8:21 PM
Love the wistful whimsy of this dance of the flies 'round the Sombrero Man, Moon Harp. ~ gw
Harp Avatar
April 15, 2026 at 9:38 AM
Gershon, Thank you so much for appreciating my poem. I had a lot of fun with it. :)
One Avatar
April 14, 2026 at 1:47 PM
You have a wonderful.way with words...
Harp Avatar
April 15, 2026 at 9:36 AM
Thank you so much, Silent One, for appreciating my work.
Messina Avatar
April 13, 2026 at 3:20 AM
They can waltz, ballet and twist around Sombrero man until the moon winks but keep them away from me (lol). Those gnats can be annoying. Nice imagery, Moon. Thanks for stopping by, nice to meet you! Charle
Harp Avatar
April 15, 2026 at 9:35 AM
Thank you so much, Charles.
Dietrich Avatar
April 11, 2026 at 4:10 PM
This is so cool. Great way to describe a statue.
Harp Avatar
April 11, 2026 at 9:23 PM
Thank you, Andrea, for appreciating this poem. I really had fun with this one. Moon Harp
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