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Image result for picture of an old man in a poncho and sombrero I don't mean this in a insulting way just in a way that

says his spirit might be there. I believe though when you go, you are gone. 

Sombrero

sombrero 'pon peg owner six feet underground.... poncho wiggles fast
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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August 1, 2023 at 1:57 PM
Wearing the protective shield of this poncho and sombrero, he finds solace from the scorching sun and relentless rain. A magnificent creation, Senryu Sara!
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August 2, 2023 at 5:25 AM
Thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the visit. Sara
George Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 8:42 PM
With this poncho and sombrero on , he is safe from sun and rain. Great Senryu!
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July 31, 2023 at 2:55 AM
Thank you, Valsa. Yes, I would say those items were very good at protecting a person. Sara
Wolf Avatar
July 29, 2023 at 8:02 PM
I fine this quite amusing, Sara! (I guess that makes me a 'Mex-ogynist,' eh?!). Keep 'em coming, Gershon
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July 29, 2023 at 11:14 PM
Thank you, Gershon. You have a way with words. Sara
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