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Somber Symphony

The piercing stars glow such a gentle white Allure, composed by purely nature’s wit Attend to melodies of sacred night The hillside yonder is forlornly bright Fragments of sleeping heavens snugly fit The piercing stars glow such a gentle white A milky storm of conflagration flight No winsome sweet reality does sit Attend to melodies of sacred night In evanescence they name deep twilight Dimmest strings and erratic dreams are knit The piercing stars glow such a gentle white A pitch as deep as a medieval knight The crooning echoes are softly moonlit Attend to melodies of sacred night Nyx is singing sweetly a softest slight Somnambulists are silenced bit by bit The piercing stars glow such a gentle white Attend to melodies of sacred night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/5/2016 1:10:00 PM
Very good
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Date: 6/23/2016 9:52:00 PM
Rachel, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/23/2016 1:22:00 PM
Well penned Rachel, good flow with nice rhyme. Keep spilling the ink, blessings, Gordon
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Date: 6/23/2016 2:06:00 AM
Nice first post... Rachel... Welcome to this flourishing community. Your gonna love it here.... skat
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