Somber Days

I am somber like November days and my words speak weak, as if through tired tongue I see the trees stand naked reaching their limbs across the stream as if touching and comforting each other from the bitter cold that's settling in sometimes I envy them I want to stand naked arch my back reach towards hands and feel the comfort of more than I am allowed and escape the bitterness as it settles in it doesn't seem fair to question a day or night that wears the same veil as me, colorless and silent in the breeze as it whispers through the trees sometimes I want to lean my ear and eavesdrop on them I want to peak beneath the skies veil and see the colors blend to see the rain less clear through colored drops fall upon a canvas and paint a masterpiece I want to feel my hands finger a pen, without tingling from bottled up emotions to feel my soul inside me not as if locked outside looking in, as if a stranger to my own life not be the afterthought or an emotion beyond words of some poet's muse I want to know the meaning of this emptiness I want to understand why the tree is as naked as my thoughts in winter yet dressed heavy in the summer and most beautiful in the fall why does beauty fall become grounded and dance in November's wind somber, like the day....
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March 30, 2020 at 9:03 AM
I've read several of your poems today, this beautiful one being my favorite.
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July 20, 2019 at 6:20 AM
Fall days are definitely the somberest ones. Spring ones are my favorites when birds start to sing and flowers start blooming.
Adams Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 8:41 AM
I agree ... spring is much more alive though both have beauty... thanks for stopping by :)
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February 25, 2016 at 4:34 PM
So nice to read your poetry this evening, keep up the good work. Light & Love Debbie
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October 4, 2015 at 4:30 PM
Hi Sandra, after reading Linda's "Invitation #2" blog. I am here to Wish You A happy Birthday... Hope you will have a nice and wonderful birthday. Love SKAT
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May 8, 2014 at 10:32 AM
Hi Sandra, As I read this it reminded me of days gone by and days ahead. Forward capturing of seasons~Deep thought and feelings, It spoke every thing as it should in this epic beauty of yours. Thanks so very much for sharing this lovely write with us my friend~ Peace, Deborah
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November 26, 2013 at 11:06 PM
Breathtaking. Im adding this to my favorites :)
Adams Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 11:04 AM
wow, thank you Jay :)
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November 26, 2013 at 4:27 PM
Hi Sandra, A most lovely write..I liked this one. Ken
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November 26, 2013 at 6:21 PM
Thank you Ken :)
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November 26, 2013 at 8:43 AM
Your last line....sublime, Sandra! Jimbo
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November 26, 2013 at 6:22 PM
Thank you so much Jim :)
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November 26, 2013 at 8:38 AM
beautifully crafted piece
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November 26, 2013 at 6:23 PM
thank you Liam :)
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November 25, 2013 at 3:36 PM
excellent sophisticated writing & thought process I think you should submit here Sandra see what you think? http://www.blackbird.vcu.edu/v12n2/poetry.shtml Light & Love
Adams Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 4:05 PM
thank you Debbie...I will have to go and check it out and see what the site is about...I will let you know :) hugs
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November 25, 2013 at 3:13 PM
love this thoughtful write, my friend - congrats on your wins too : )
Adams Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 6:23 PM
thank you Jack :)
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November 24, 2013 at 8:17 PM
Thanks for the congrads, great write here keep up the great work.
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November 24, 2013 at 8:32 PM
thank you and you are welcome :)
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November 24, 2013 at 3:59 PM
- A deep   poem   Sandra .... gray November day ... then comes the snow with its white blanket .... Wrapped around bare branches. - Skilled poem ... always. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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November 24, 2013 at 8:32 PM
oh yes, we had a small taste of that snow last night... enough was still beneath my windshield wipers this morning when I ventured out... thank you Anne-Lise... hugs
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November 24, 2013 at 2:58 PM
Sandy, when you say you wish all these things, my dear, you ARE all these things. you are the truest of poets for your poetry is elegant and effortless. Another beauty that you must add to that collection of poetry when you do your book.
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November 24, 2013 at 8:30 PM
wow... thanks Andrea....I wasn't even sure of this poem as I read it back to myself before posting it... hugs :)
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November 24, 2013 at 1:49 PM
a fluid poem that seems both sensual and sophisticated all at once - a true joy to read your kind of november, sandra ..:) huggs
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November 24, 2013 at 8:29 PM
thank you Nette...I don't know why this time of year stirs me most... hugs :)
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November 24, 2013 at 1:17 PM
excellent Sandra deep feelings running through out kudos Shadow x smile hug 7
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November 24, 2013 at 8:28 PM
thank you Shadow...I am wowed by your reply...I didn't know if I was happy with the poem at first :) hugs
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November 24, 2013 at 12:56 PM
Wonderful poem by you Sandra!LOVE it !!
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November 24, 2013 at 8:27 PM
thank you Kash :) hugs
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