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The sky cracks open in blue birds singing to hiding gloom, young green grass cuddles at touch as for envy, lost souls cry and mourn Cry and mourn Cry and mourn Cry and mourn Below mud and dirt in hopeless caves tortured by the woodswallow yelling loudly over hollows desperate for digging own graves they scrape, scrape and scrape Scrape Scrape Scrape While childest angels play and laugh happily in a meadow imbued with the radiant sun’s glare lulled for godly chill and sweet air, forever, they’ll keep laughing without grow, just Laughter Laughter Laughter

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Date: 7/25/2015 11:32:00 PM
DAWRUIN:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 7/20/2015 12:06:00 AM
Hi DAWRUIN.. Your fabulous first write is already being featured this week on the Soup homepage.. Huge congrats and the tip of my hat! -LYRIC
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Date: 7/8/2015 9:05:00 PM
Hi DAWRUIN.. this is a powerful, well constructed write, that I enjoyed reading today! I want to WELCOME you to Poetry Soup, a great place to display your creative, artist works. It's also an ideal place to meet and be shaped by other poets. I read a lot of poems and I'm looking forward to checking out more of your works. PS.. If you have a moment, check out my poems as well. I'm looking forward to becoming friends with those who do (Iron sharpens Iron).. Talk soon, LYRIC MAN
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Date: 7/5/2015 11:38:00 PM
Hi Dawruin, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/5/2015 9:25:00 PM
Dawruin,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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