Solstice

A renewal of the space, Of gravity, time, allowance, New creations, new life. Revival spread through the lands and the hearts. This is our father’s creation, The beauty, mind boggling. The air fresh, crisp, sweet, The beginning, the end, New paths, new walks. Roads . . . they end. They wind. Animals, people, All things breathing. Solstice!

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 1/15/2014 5:52:00 PM

What a beautiful piece and very inspiring. It reminds me to be appreciative of the beauty all around us, and in us, in every living creature. Always, Laura

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/8/2014 9:56:00 PM

hi, Jodi. I like the refreshing taste of solstice, deep and beautiful. I luv the new meaning from start to end....hugs...Linda

Poet Tacito

Date: 1/8/2014 2:15:00 PM

This was utterly beautiful. You created & established a very touching atmosphere in these lines.

Jiril Clemons

Date: 1/8/2014 1:49:00 PM

Great poem, Jody. Deeply expressed, in few words.Very good description of your surroundings as well. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like.