Solstice

solstice
light becomes dark
saddened sun hides early
grieving grays grace blankets of rain
body glove of muscle aches, sorrow scarf 
comfort in numbness, in stillness
sun smiles, warmth startles
dark becomes light
solstice

12-26-19

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Jan Allison

Date: 12/29/2019 6:44:00 PM

beautifully described Juliet, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Juliet Ligon
Date: 12/29/2019 11:36:00 PM

Thanks, Jan.

Eric Cohen

Date: 12/29/2019 12:13:00 AM

Really like this. "Light becomes dark...dark becomes light ..." That brings us round again! All the best.

Juliet Ligon
Date: 12/29/2019 10:22:00 AM

Thanks, Eric.

Hilo Poet

Date: 12/28/2019 10:09:00 AM

A most welcomed and noble undertaking that I truly enjoy, my compliments on your win and my heartfelt thanks for entertaining my contest ~ Aloha always William

Juliet Ligon
Date: 12/28/2019 3:43:00 PM

Thanks, William and thank you for inspiring me to try a form that I'd never tried before.

Silent One

Date: 12/26/2019 1:30:00 PM

This one is very good also..

Juliet Ligon
Date: 12/28/2019 3:43:00 PM

Thanks, Silent One.