Juliet Ligon Poet Rictameter

Solstice

solstice
light becomes dark
saddened sun hides early
grieving grays grace blankets of rain
body glove of muscle aches, sorrow scarf 
comfort in numbness, in stillness
sun smiles, warmth startles
dark becomes light
solstice

12-26-19

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Jan Allison December 29, 2019 at 6:44 PM beautifully described Juliet, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx Juliet Ligon December 29, 2019 at 11:36 PM Thanks, Jan.

Eric Cohen December 29, 2019 at 12:13 AM Really like this. "Light becomes dark...dark becomes light ..." That brings us round again! All the best. Juliet Ligon December 29, 2019 at 10:22 AM Thanks, Eric.

William Kelii Kekaula December 28, 2019 at 10:09 AM A most welcomed and noble undertaking that I truly enjoy, my compliments on your win and my heartfelt thanks for entertaining my contest ~ Aloha always William Juliet Ligon December 28, 2019 at 3:43 PM Thanks, William and thank you for inspiring me to try a form that I'd never tried before.

Silent One December 26, 2019 at 1:30 PM This one is very good also.. Juliet Ligon December 28, 2019 at 3:43 PM Thanks, Silent One.