Robert L. Hinshaw Poet Footle

Solo Flight

Kicks tires
Checks wires

Full stop 
Revs prop

Must heed
Airspeed

Thumbs up
Climbs up

No sweat
(Not yet)

Alas
No gas

In spin
Chagrin

No chute
Oh shoot

Bad day
Mayday

Crashed plane
On plain

Washout
No doubt

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Nette Onclaud February 16, 2019 at 1:22 PM amazing, bob... my dad would surely enjoy this the way i do!...you are in a roll with foorles!...huggs Robert L. Hinshaw February 16, 2019 at 3:32 PM Thank you nette. I like doing footles altho they are a bit difficult to concoct, especially trying to make them rhyme. Best always - Bob

Lindsay Laurie February 15, 2019 at 7:59 PM G'day Bob … only someone around aeroplanes could write this - thanks Bob - Lindsay