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A gorgeous silence fell on your departure, air that once shimmered ire and malice, is now clear and free and fit to be breathed, in days were lost, the minutes crept into numb hours, feet turned circles into squares dumb of what to do where to go the mind flooded with vast arrays of pictured thoughts, emotions bubbled to boil, then nothing, blank screens all the way round anchoring self onto a listing lull instilled the sublime, falling for the silence and drifting into the grace of peace I find myself beautifully solo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/23/2014 1:51:00 PM
Jayne you make being solo a very peaceful place to be, I like it....David
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Jayne Eggins
Date: 2/28/2014 9:12:00 AM
It can be if you let it :) love Jayne x
Date: 2/23/2014 11:14:00 AM
Jayne...this peace you describe...so necessary for a poet! Good work! Jimbo
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Jayne Eggins
Date: 2/28/2014 9:12:00 AM
I can only write in the silence its definitely a necessity being a poet love Jayne x
Date: 2/22/2014 12:32:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your very expressive and creative work...I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Jayne Eggins
Date: 2/28/2014 9:11:00 AM
Hi Sara, I am very happy you enjoyed this one sorry for the late reply its been a busy week hope your well much love Jayne x
Date: 2/22/2014 9:23:00 AM
I am also there with you Jayne. Did you ever think that would be the case?..It has been said when you aren't looking for love is when you will find it.. Another excellent piece Jayne
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Jayne Eggins
Date: 2/22/2014 9:29:00 AM
Tim, I thought I was going to grow old with him but it wasn't to be, I have heard when your not looking for love that it will find you, I have been lucky in love for the most part, would I be greedy ? To want it again...love Jayne

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