Solitude By the Reverie

My mind a dislodged leaf floats away
on the quiet stream of dreams from cacophony of life 
to a distant placid cobalt lake 
soaking the azure dust of the sparkling sky.

On the banks stand the petrified trees 
for the stilled branches don’t sway,
their shadows on the lake are unruffled 
for the squall has stopped to blow. 
The motionless mist hangs, a veil of dense solitude,
until the clouds descend and melt it away.

The drops of rain pierce the water, 
dissipate the pain of the broken heart
in radiating ripples that disappear
in the calm water poised unperturbed.
They take my mind behind the shroud of stillness
to the serene shade of solitude 
on the banks of the flowing dreams.

I plunge and dive deep within,
see my dreams weave at lonely depth
the tapestry of profound bliss for my soul.

May 31, 2018.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Haight Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 8:27 PM
Beautiful imagery, Subimal! Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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July 8, 2018 at 12:57 AM
Thank you, Sandra.
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July 4, 2018 at 11:16 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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July 5, 2018 at 12:40 AM
Thank you, Susan.
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July 4, 2018 at 9:57 PM
Well penned, Subimal. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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July 5, 2018 at 12:40 AM
Thank you, Line for visiting.
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July 4, 2018 at 5:10 AM
Congrats on a good win Subimal.
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July 5, 2018 at 12:40 AM
Thank you, Mohan.
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June 16, 2018 at 10:30 PM
Lovely imagery. Congrats on you top win, Subimal.
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June 18, 2018 at 5:09 AM
Thank you, Line.
Sands Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 9:58 AM
Congratulations for your win Subimal :)
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June 11, 2018 at 1:10 AM
Thank you, Heidi.
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June 8, 2018 at 8:15 AM
- A short greeting and congratulations on your great winning poem, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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June 11, 2018 at 1:10 AM
Many thanks, Anne-Lise.
Scars Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 7:33 AM
wow! The imagery alone stands out. The metaphors are outstanding as well. Amazing poem sweet Subimal!thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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June 11, 2018 at 1:09 AM
Thank you, Laura.
Leiser Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 2:29 PM
This is gorgeous, Subimal! Loved your masterful weave of words, creating emotive imagery! A fave! :)
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June 6, 2018 at 12:21 AM
Thank you, Laura for your visit and for appreciating the poem.
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June 6, 2018 at 12:21 AM
Thank you, Laura for your visit and for appreciating the poem.
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