Solitude a Love Knot

SOLITUDE A LOVE KNOT Rushing millipede of rain down my window pane sadness drifts, glided uninvited ounce reef. Unruffled even from billowing strain, solitude steals unnoticed like a thief. Tiptoeing feet over my naked crippling fear. Verbiage expressed in trying train distraught. I... yearning a life of dearest love cheer let it be from solitude, it will sprout lots. Loneliness prism echoes songs of sparrows. Nectared bullet actions, a long tender sought. Brushing my frozen hind with hues of rainbow. In solitude, knowing thyself a love knot. Healing ancient wrongs buried deep marrow. Transfixed by time, dot by dot by dot... (c)Olive ELoisa 5:09am August 09, 2014 POETRY TYPE: RONDEL

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Jan Allison

Date: 11/9/2014 4:36:00 PM

such a beautiful flow to this rhyme olive congrats on your HM - I love the rondel form you used:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/10/2014 5:09:00 PM

Your imagery is always so unique and creative, Olive. Very nice how you used a rondel form for this one!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/13/2014 7:33:00 AM

Thank you so much Andrea..:) GBU

Justin Bordner

Date: 8/10/2014 2:03:00 PM

You have a very jeweled originality to your poetry Olive. Its a privilege toconsume your soul work. " In solitude knowing thyself a love knot...Healing ancient wrongs buried deep marrow..." this is savory introspection, and beautiful novelty of expression. You've just earned placement on my favorite Poet list Olive...J.A.B.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/10/2014 2:27:00 PM

ThanKs much Justin..:) really appreciate those bit by bit comments..:) thank you for adding me to your list..:) As for the write, I can say that all of us though we seem all too busy with so many things it's a must that we allot a time for ourselves in knowing and be aware of our own... In solitude am sure lots of things can be known and sometimes in being alone makes one reflect and think better..:)

James Fraser

Date: 8/10/2014 9:35:00 AM

Another Gem Olive, so enjoyable to read this wet Sunday in the Highlands :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/10/2014 2:23:00 PM

Thanks much James.. I appreciate your visit..:)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/9/2014 5:13:00 AM

Oh Olive ! This is so wonderful,, love knot out of solitude,, good luck to u!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/10/2014 2:23:00 PM

Thank you so much Dr. Upma.. I am glad with your visits..:) GBU