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Solitude

Solitude You created everything The blue sky with shiny clouds The blue ocean with transparent water showing corals sleeping on the deep seabed But not only that Animals living in deep forests where lights never get through Birds perching in dark holes, their resting places, on bare hillsides The moon in the dark sky creating blue shadows on dark roads The unimaginably deep ocean reflecting the moon You created all of them I cannot stop marveling because of their beauty Do you really leave me alone not to have someone to share my emotion? I read much darkness in your words I found much comfort hid in the darkness I believed you are really taking care of people like me Please let me share the darkness Please help me

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Date: 3/8/2017 12:55:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant and beautifully expressed.
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Felicia Jarvis
Date: 3/8/2017 1:15:00 AM
Thank you, Elizabeth.
Date: 2/23/2017 9:37:00 AM
Welcome to the soup.
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Date: 2/23/2017 9:36:00 AM
A tremendous first poetic offering. Well and articulately expressed.
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Felicia Jarvis
Date: 2/23/2017 2:38:00 PM
Thank you, Richard.
Date: 2/15/2017 8:15:00 PM
Good poem. It eloquently tells us how you love darkness, a source of solace.
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Felicia Jarvis
Date: 2/19/2017 8:16:00 AM
Sorry, not darkeness, darkness.
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Felicia Jarvis
Date: 2/19/2017 8:15:00 AM
Yes, I love to see many stars in darkeness.

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