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Solitude

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Below is the poem entitled Solitude which was written by poet Felicia Jarvis. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Solitude

Solitude

You created everything
The blue sky with shiny clouds
The blue ocean with  transparent water showing corals sleeping on the deep seabed
But not only that
Animals living in deep forests where lights never get through
Birds perching in dark holes, their resting places, on bare hillsides
The moon in the dark sky creating blue shadows on dark roads
The unimaginably deep ocean reflecting the moon
You created all of them
I cannot stop marveling because of their beauty
Do you really leave me alone not to have someone to share my emotion?
I read much darkness in your words
I found much comfort hid in the darkness
I believed you are really taking care of people like me
Please let me share the darkness
Please help me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 3/8/2017 12:55:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant and beautifully expressed.
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Felicia Jarvis
Date: 3/8/2017 1:15:00 AM
Thank you, Elizabeth.
Date: 2/23/2017 9:37:00 AM
Welcome to the soup.
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Date: 2/23/2017 9:36:00 AM
A tremendous first poetic offering. Well and articulately expressed.
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Felicia Jarvis
Date: 2/23/2017 2:38:00 PM
Thank you, Richard.
Date: 2/15/2017 8:15:00 PM
Good poem. It eloquently tells us how you love darkness, a source of solace.
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Felicia Jarvis
Date: 2/19/2017 8:16:00 AM
Sorry, not darkeness, darkness.
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Felicia Jarvis
Date: 2/19/2017 8:15:00 AM
Yes, I love to see many stars in darkeness.