Solitude

Solitude

You created everything
The blue sky with shiny clouds
The blue ocean with  transparent water showing corals sleeping on the deep seabed
But not only that
Animals living in deep forests where lights never get through
Birds perching in dark holes, their resting places, on bare hillsides
The moon in the dark sky creating blue shadows on dark roads
The unimaginably deep ocean reflecting the moon
You created all of them
I cannot stop marveling because of their beauty
Do you really leave me alone not to have someone to share my emotion?
I read much darkness in your words
I found much comfort hid in the darkness
I believed you are really taking care of people like me
Please let me share the darkness
Please help me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Kinch  Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 12:55 AM
Absolutely brilliant and beautifully expressed.
Jarvis Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 1:15 AM
Thank you, Elizabeth.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 9:37 AM
Welcome to the soup.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 9:36 AM
A tremendous first poetic offering. Well and articulately expressed.
Jarvis Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 2:38 PM
Thank you, Richard.
Me Not Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 8:15 PM
Good poem. It eloquently tells us how you love darkness, a source of solace.
Jarvis Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 8:16 AM
Sorry, not darkeness, darkness.
Jarvis Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 8:15 AM
Yes, I love to see many stars in darkeness.
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