Solitude

I sit alone and think of you
Of everything we've both been through

Silent tears pouring from my eyes
Like raindrops falling from the skies

I miss you so much every day
I love you is what I want to say

Jan Allison
4th December 2014

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Charmaine Chircop

December 8, 2014 at 6:53 PM

This is a heart grabber Jan.. Life is like that isnt it..but you are not alone hon.Together We ll ride the winds and win..Hugs

Jan Allison

December 9, 2014 at 1:06 AM

Thanks Charmaine its been the worst year of my life:-( Hugs Jan xx

Shadow Hamilton

December 5, 2014 at 5:16 AM

heart wrenching poem Jan bad time of year to feel so sad cheer up great pen dear friend hugs

Jan Allison

December 5, 2014 at 7:12 AM

It's been the worst year of my life Shadow but I am still smiling as much as I can:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

December 5, 2014 at 1:01 AM

Lovely Jan! Sweet and sublime my friend// hugs//

Jan Allison

December 5, 2014 at 1:07 AM

Thanks Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

December 4, 2014 at 10:49 PM

Beautiful but sad couplets Jan...I hope things get better .....hugs Tim

Jan Allison

December 5, 2014 at 1:07 AM

Been a tough 12 months Tim - the terrible news from Tuesday finally hit me yesterday but I am smiling now :-( :-)Hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

December 4, 2014 at 9:21 PM

sweet and sad at the same time. sorry for your pain, Jan.

Jan Allison

December 5, 2014 at 1:06 AM

Gee what a year Andrea! Thanks as ever my friend:-) Hugs Jan xx

Peter Dorr

December 4, 2014 at 6:13 PM

Very moving. Keep writing Jan! Best wishes, Peter.

Jan Allison

December 4, 2014 at 6:15 PM

Thanks so much Peter:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

December 4, 2014 at 5:01 PM

I am touched by this short yet effective write, Jan. Hugs // paul

Jan Allison

December 4, 2014 at 5:07 PM

Been pretty emotional today Paul - reality finally hit when I saw pictures in the press today:-( Hugs jan xx

Robert Stoner Jr

December 4, 2014 at 2:55 PM

very sweet and well written Jan, Congrats on your win for muse, My comments and inbox have stopped working for the last 3 days so I am kinda out of the loop on comments and reply's for the last 2 poems I wrote. Guess they tanked ,lol They are working on the issue but no resolution so far. :o) marked as a Fav for me

Jan Allison

December 4, 2014 at 4:42 PM

Thanks so much Robert for your continued support:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne

December 4, 2014 at 10:35 AM

This applies to more than one person in your life right now. This write knocks me off my feet. What beauty you created by reaching into your heart and stating in the most simple of ways what you found there. This is poetry at its best! A FAV!!!!

Jan Allison

December 4, 2014 at 4:41 PM

Its very simply written but written from the heart Maurice:-( Hugs jan xxx