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Solitude

Ah! To be adrift upon the boundless sea sailing, sailing, sailing! Alone with sea and pristine sky with southerly winds prevailing. No particular destination in mind as upon the surging sea I plod, Nor is there another soul in view as I quietly commune with God! Ah! To be alone at night in the desert pondering, pondering, pondering! I lie to refresh my weary bones after a day of vagabond wandering. Savoring the soothing quietude with gentle zephyrs caressing my face, Gazing heavenward as constellations wink at me from outer space! Ah! To scale the highest mountain where even eagles dare not fly! The precious solitude of it all! I can reach out and touch the sky! Such divine inspiration it brings to this mere mortal's languid soul, As God's Creation beyond is revealed for me to relish and extol! Ah! To amble down a forest path when autumn leaves adorn the trees! Gold and crimson leaves waft about me, stirred by an occasional breeze! I'm awed by The Master Artist's handiwork no mere artist dare portray. This priceless solitude and beauty I shall treasure forever and a day! Ah! To lie 'neath a shade nigh a rippling stream and dream, dream, dream! Watching vagabond clouds scudding across the sky is solitude supreme! I suppose that there are many folks who prefer mingling with the multitude, But I treasure time alone to dream, write and muse in peaceful solitude! Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/2/2013 8:41:00 PM
Sometimes good, sometimes bad, I mostly like it. I mean solitude ;} your poem is great ;} hi Bob ;}
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Date: 7/6/2011 2:55:00 PM
Excellent piece, Sarge. There's a lot to be said for Solitude and you said it nicely. Great write. Ralphie
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Date: 7/2/2011 11:19:00 AM
There is a lot to be said for solitude and the sea and forest can certainly provide it, Bob. I'm envious of birds' ability to fly above it all and witness "God's Creation" from a different perspective. Very much enjoyed this delightful rhyme, dear. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/1/2011 7:16:00 PM
A mind capturing poem here Robert full of wonderful desires.Enjoyed very much.
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Date: 7/1/2011 1:52:00 PM
Bob - what a wonderful poem. Thanks for posting it. Mike
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Date: 7/1/2011 10:10:00 AM
Well done!! Enjoyed reading!!
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Date: 6/30/2011 3:17:00 PM
Quite a beauty, moving and flowing, communing with the almighty, Bob
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Date: 6/30/2011 3:02:00 PM
very very very good, thoughts n measures understood, great verse here bob bloody good, and I'm for solitude! good on ya blue, Don
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Date: 6/30/2011 2:51:00 PM
Now this is my kind of poetry. what a beauty..kind of different from your usual. I love it my dear. BG
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Date: 6/30/2011 1:11:00 PM
Such a moving write dear poet ! I came to your post to incite you, with "other matters", lol; yet, I find myself detached because of your intoxicating write ! Awesome sir! Have a wonderful weekend...much love, james
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Date: 6/30/2011 11:35:00 AM
It has been a pleasure reading your poetry today Bob. I will be back again soon to read more. Hoping you find your soul filled with inspiration today and everyday and may your writing endeavors come to be. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/30/2011 11:22:00 AM
loved this one you wrote as always. thank you for your comment on Blooming Rose Bush
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Date: 6/30/2011 10:54:00 AM
a tender spiritual dialogue with the One, robert... the repitition of words highlights your beautiful plea... should this be for a contest, winning parised for thee! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 6/30/2011 10:10:00 AM
Oh I hear you my brother. We are indeed kindred spirits. This is lovely and there is no time like that to commune with our God. To relax in His peace. Wonderful. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/30/2011 9:00:00 AM
wonderful dreams of divine relaxation and adventure Bob.. all to communicate with our Mighty Creator.. wonderful words to inspire the reader .. luv the grand adjectives u implemented for descriptive purposes. if for a contest ..good luck.. my friend.. an awesome review of beauty..luv..
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