Solitude

LONELINESS


dune    sands    sting

            sad        seagulls    sing

cold      wild        tide  

            empty     beach      wide
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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March 3, 2011 at 7:58 AM
This is an excellent description of the beach here in Ormond Beach, FL, Syd. The sands really do "sting" in the summer when it's hot and the seagulls seem to have a melancholy song as they fly over the "wild tide." I have been away for a week and it's good to be back, dear. Thanks for visiting my haiku. Love, Carolyn
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March 2, 2011 at 2:55 PM
What a pleasing visual you have created, Sydney
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