Solitude

Where are the words
that forged the tale into life? 
The syllables green and grey,

that grew out of mists 
greener, and made
their way into the closets

of our hearts,

the sounds collapse 
along the fringes of molten nights;
the blessed sins and signs

lie crusted on the floor,
while the moment falls 
and crumbles in the caverns

of our hearts.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 21, 2016 at 2:42 PM
Pragna Paramita Mondal, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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December 27, 2015 at 1:51 PM
WELL DONE
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June 15, 2010 at 4:37 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Pradna. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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June 14, 2010 at 2:16 PM
Such elegant prose, your use of words are clearly well thought of, such a sparkling poem, keep writing. From Gavin.
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