Sara Kendrick Poet Terza Rima

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Solitude

Flocculent clouds suck the life from bel-esprit
She misses going out and warm springtime sun
She desires one verdant leaf upon a tree

Sharing feelings with the menagerie what fun
But this deafening silence lends to deep thought,
Deep relaxation, a need that's number one

Maybe our faith in God will again be sought
Like our founding fathers bowed knees in prayer  
Let our silence and solitude resound with praise

May thankfulness fill capacious waves of air
Not complaints and brooding that leads to despair

Contest: Heart Universes
Sponsor: Regina McIntosh
Date: 01/25/2021

Theme: "Like the silence that screams, cursing solitude....whispers of faith
sing patiently with prayers"

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Jack Horne January 28, 2021 at 12:44 PM such a thoughtful spiritual write, my friend Sara Kendrick January 28, 2021 at 1:54 PM Jack, We all need to have times to feed the spirit or we will be totally dry. Your presence at my page is always encouraging. Sara

Judy Ball January 26, 2021 at 6:46 PM Beautiful Sara. Let us use this tie to seek a new beginning with out Savior. Good Stuff. JB Sara Kendrick January 27, 2021 at 3:40 AM Judy, We all need a Savior and we really need to be close to Him right now. This is a very scary time for all of us. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Jack Horne January 26, 2021 at 12:21 PM lovely thoughtful write here, my friend Sara Kendrick January 27, 2021 at 3:25 AM Jack, If only we could go back to a love for God and respect for each other. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Kim Rodrigues January 25, 2021 at 5:32 PM Love the first line and “May thankfulness fill capacious waves of air” Yes praise gets our Lord’s ear. God bless! Sara Kendrick January 26, 2021 at 9:01 AM Kim, Your review of my work is very encouraging. Thanks for the time spent here. Sara

Andrea Dietrich January 25, 2021 at 2:06 PM wow, you really did this well, Sara. I hope I can come up with something! Sara Kendrick January 26, 2021 at 8:59 AM Andrea, Oh!! You always come up with one that is excellent. Thanks for the kind review of my work. Sara

Victor Buhagiar January 25, 2021 at 11:58 AM Our faith in God should never waiver. ~~ Sara Kendrick January 26, 2021 at 8:56 AM Victor, Yes, it should never waiver but sometimes the Devil tries to use different happenings in our lives to cause doubt or he even causes the problems or leads us astray. Your presence at my page is always like a breath of spring air. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen January 25, 2021 at 11:47 AM - Sounds so beautiful and peaceful with your beautiful words, Sara :) - A winning poem in my eyes ... good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Sara Kendrick January 25, 2021 at 2:11 PM Sunshine, Thanks for the encouragement in saying it could be a winning poem. Sara

Anitha Jayasankar January 25, 2021 at 9:24 AM A poem so apt for the theme Sara. I loved the flow of words from one stanza to other. A prayer to God in silence gives so much peace to the restless mind. Best wishes for the contest Sara. Hugs ~ Ani Sara Kendrick January 25, 2021 at 2:05 PM Anitha, A prayer is always what is needed the most in our lives and sometime we resort to it in the end not the beginning. Your presence here is appreciated. Sara

Alexis Y. January 25, 2021 at 7:49 AM Hi Sara, You have composed a well-written write with a good message. I agree, in these trying times one must embrace the silence and solitude and humble themselves in prayer and praise. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis Sara Kendrick January 25, 2021 at 2:02 PM Alexis, Your kind review of my work is so supportive. I appreciate the time spent here reading and commenting on my work. Sara

Arturo Michael January 25, 2021 at 7:03 AM We may not know the future, but surely the past shows us...to humble before this wonderful creation called life... Nice write Sandra...A good week to you. Sara Kendrick January 25, 2021 at 8:52 AM Michael, Your presence at my page is always encouraging. Thanks so much for stopping by. Sara

Joanna Daniel January 25, 2021 at 6:53 AM This is beautiful, just the way Regina would like it:) way to go, Sara:) Sara Kendrick January 25, 2021 at 8:40 AM Jo, Thanks for your encouraging review of my work. Sara