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Solitude

How many songs have I sung, that you have forgotten? How many bridges have I crossed, that you have ruined? I tried to run away – chasing, the elusive rainbow; On a flowing stream – hoping, I could find grains of gold. I hung my head. Teardrops fell, I looked around, forever searching; And in no time, in anguish, I cried, "Hey, I love you!" And echo answered, "Hey, I love you!" Honorable Mention BRIAN'S SELECT H,any form,any theme Contest Judged: 6/15/2020 12:00:00 AM Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 6/21/2020 6:29:00 AM
A deeply emotive poem, how important are those three words...
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Date: 6/18/2020 10:12:00 AM
Wonderful writing, dear friend! Love it. God bless you with love, Gina
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Date: 6/17/2020 6:34:00 AM
Heartwarming words of innocent love. I am in awe of the beauty with which you let your emotions flow. Blessings. Keep writing and inspiring. Much love :)
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Date: 6/17/2020 4:11:00 AM
The echo of YOU...I like the vibes here...Well done
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Date: 6/15/2020 7:24:00 AM
Those magical three words are ever so powerful--loved the way your poem turns to a beautiful ending, JCB.
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Date: 6/15/2020 3:40:00 AM
Could just picture and hear the message at the end. Tom
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Date: 6/15/2020 2:31:00 AM
wow...aromatically thrilled the echo...beautiful poem shared
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Date: 6/15/2020 1:02:00 AM
Love returning in an echo. I love this idea and wonder how many have shouted those words to hear them return. A wonderful little gem JCB! Blessings xxoo
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