Solitary Gum Tree

All around looks cruel and starved,
and bleached bones define a stretch
of drought and death that halved
life for that lone, starving wretch.

Mountains have formed a background,
shaped by sporadic storms and rain;
a dry creek bed revives when drowned
where stands forlorn upon the plain.

One lone gum in friendless splendour, 
where from a sapling passed the years;
stands without sibling contender,
to guard these vast untamed frontiers.

The passing years have left their mark,
with scars and wounds by elements.
Storms, fire and water stripped its bark
without concern for sentiments.

Life and death on widespread limbs;
decayed and fallen, yet endures
with glossy leaves and flowered rims,
to state still many years assures.

The sun that crisps the baking earth,
provided shade for travelling souls,
and sustenance in times of dearth,
or shelter in the dead limb holes.

Striving on through stout revival,
this grand gum rejecting failure.
Here stands the spirit of survival,
that represents Australia.

I stood before this gentle giant,
in silent wonder with respect;
observe foliage still defiant,
as hot winds blow boughs unchecked. 

And so this solitary gum;
an outback artist’s wondrous theme,
becomes immortalized by some,
with a soft pastel colour scheme.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 7/16/2018 6:28:00 AM
Lindsay, this is a wonderful write. I actually never heard of a gum tree before. But you have painted a picture in my mind so well with this gem! G'day mate...love this...Charles
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Date: 7/17/2018 6:57:00 PM
Hi there Charles … a gum tree is a eucalypt. I believe there are large blue gum plantations in California. A wild fire amongst eucalypts is very dangerous in summer. Thank you for your kind comment Charles - Lindsay
Date: 7/15/2018 9:31:00 PM
You have brilliantly immortalized this steadfast gum tree Lindsay! I think you are one of the most talented writers here at Poetry Soup and I always enjoy your offerings. Paying homage to this lone tree really moved me because of the love I have for trees. Our earth would not be fit to live in without our beloved trees! This lovely poem is going into my Faves. xxoo : )
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Date: 7/16/2018 1:45:00 AM
Thank you Connie for your positive humbling comment. I reckon there are number of great poets here. Many of the laneway shrubs and trees; windbreaks, garden shrubs in this area were grown by me as a hobby - I loved the challenge of seed and cutting propagation - thank you Connie - Lindsay
Date: 7/15/2018 1:59:00 AM
You paint a vivd scene as usual, Lindsay, reminded me of the trees in deadvlei, Namibia. Excellent verse, and I like the analogy of you tough resilient Aussies, too. Regards, Viv
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Date: 7/16/2018 1:41:00 AM
G'day Viv … if Namibia is as harsh as the outback Viv, then you will easily understand how tough the flora is that survives in these conditions - amazing really - thanks once again Viv - Lindsay
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