Solidness of Another Kind

Imaginary equivocates 
Inquiring all along the states 
In a silenced unreal fullness of Time 
Necessity and Space, for a while 
Forever unconsciuous of her mind 
Inexistent demonstration of  her exile 
Our world, our dimension, our style 
Decided all in one only night 
Before the announced wreckship of mankind 
Unnatural and delight 
of our notes, dreams and lines  
 that were simple vovels of an infant cry 
Above the sheet of shyness 
And over the street of soleness 
The tremble of a while 
An electrified dumb image of dismay 
As it looks from behind 
It’s a simple algorithm 
But with no way to retourn back again 
For the eternal stage of fearless Fate

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 10/19/2024 12:52:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/20/2016 2:31:00 AM
Anytime :) LINDA
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Date: 2/18/2016 10:12:00 AM
wow, that was epic. LINDA
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Date: 2/19/2016 4:01:00 PM
Happy to read your positive feedback to my modest attempt. Thanks from my heart
Date: 12/5/2015 8:05:00 PM
Weightless Pen, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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Date: 2/19/2016 4:05:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely words in commenting my text. I appreciated it a lot
Date: 5/12/2014 11:17:00 AM
Thank you for sharing :) It touched my heart
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Date: 2/19/2016 4:03:00 PM
Thank you from my heart. I really appreciated your comment
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