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He is much depressed He needs much comprehension He sometimes is drunk He is a good poet He has in God a strong faith He feels so guilty He becomes sober He writes a faithful poem He tries to be free He is a souper He finds solidarity He has many friends

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Date: 11/7/2014 10:01:00 PM
Oh, wow, this is really nice!! Are you describing yourself? Anyway, I see you give replies to the poets so if you answer me I won't know your answer from your replies here because I had my notifications turned off. Anyway, this is a good one.
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Mario DE PAZ
Date: 11/8/2014 5:46:00 AM
No, Andrea, I am not describing myself. I like wine but I am quite sober. I thenk i saw some souper who is probably this way and I tried to be friendly with him
Date: 7/6/2013 11:23:00 PM
awesome.... pd
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Mario DE PAZ
Date: 7/20/2013 9:51:00 AM
Thank you for appreciating