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Solid Gray Clouds

Solid gray clouds hover near here Hidden by a thick misty fog Quiet broken by birds' song dear Who share limelight with tree frogs Both now singing love's epilogue A solitary soul upon the porch Sun encased by clouds amassed Songs of the Dove's from his perch Cooo, cooo, cooo his song outlast And the dept of the tune unsurpassed Sponsor: Barbara Gorelick Contest: Clouds English Quintain/ababb two stanzas No specific meter

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/31/2013 9:03:00 AM
A very beautiful winning poem Sara... congratulations...Linda
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Date: 8/27/2013 6:50:00 PM
sara Congrats to you on your win. Morgan
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Date: 8/27/2013 9:03:00 AM
I picture you upon the porch listening to the doves. (I have a big front porch that looks over the horizon.......and often do that very thing! :)
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Date: 8/27/2013 6:43:00 AM
congrats on a great win Sara
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Date: 8/27/2013 12:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your place on the winners list Sara love xx
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Date: 8/26/2013 8:34:00 PM
Congratulations Sara... ~Love ~~SKAT
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Date: 8/26/2013 8:26:00 PM
Good for you...I had a feeling this might be your work..you always seem so close to nature. congrats. BG
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Date: 8/22/2013 9:39:00 AM
You've encapsulated some of my favourite sounds of nature in this one. Well done!
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Date: 8/20/2013 5:10:00 AM
Frost said there must be something wrong with wanting to silence any song, in your poem I hear the love songs of frogs and birds calling for mates. You found the tune of love's calling, nicely done. Robert Henry Poulin
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Date: 8/19/2013 8:44:00 PM
This is a wondrous and hugely naturalistic write my friend! I truly enjoyed reading this glorious poem this evening! What a tremendous piece, you have displayed a very natural poem here Sara, I love it! Great work!!
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Date: 8/19/2013 1:43:00 PM
Love this poem I feel like i am sitting outdoors enjoying every minute. love phyl
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Date: 8/19/2013 12:47:00 PM
- Winner poem is posted !! - Love it, Sara! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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