Solely Heart

Solely Heart
Heart keeps on
And will never be broken
Feeling lasts forever
By Nature it should be
Life faces a lot of obstacle
By nature life change
from young to old
Heart should be free from sadness
Take self- control
Current strikes edge
A wind blows all things on its way
Fire burn every things
Our daily life hit by the society
Trust your dream of yesterday
Believe on your power,
Love your lovers
And love who loves you.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/25/2016 11:38:00 PM

Nice free verse, Senqchanh, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/4/2016 12:18:00 PM

SX, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**

Xaysouvanh Phengphong

Date: 11/20/2014 4:26:00 AM

Sengchanh is really Lao name. He is one of the best Poets of the Lao Poetry Society Worldwide with 100+ members. Sooner or later they will post their works in PoetrySoup. (they have long names like him, that's typically the Lao names). Very good starting Sengchanh!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 10/25/2014 8:28:00 PM

I applaud this excellent piece and extend a warm welcome to PoetrySoup! I wish you happy writings, my friend! Pandita

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/21/2014 7:57:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Sengchanh - I choose your first lovely written poem :)) - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)