D.W. Rodgers Poet Fibonacci

Sole Soul

I
once
thought we
were one, that
you were my soul mate
until I realized that our
joint passion for a specific salt water flatfish
cooked in meuniere sauce was not sufficient to maintain a long lasting relationship

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D.W. Rodgers March 17, 2018 at 2:32 PM Make that 34 syllables - still a challenge. Keith Osborne March 18, 2018 at 5:30 PM I think it gets a little too wordy after 21. Again, very nice job on this whimsical piece.

Keith Osborne March 16, 2018 at 4:17 PM I enjoy this. And, so far, you are the only fibonacci writer to have 21 syllables in their final line. Where they get 23 i will never know. My only minor issue with this one is that you accidentally omited the 3 syllable line. But nicely done! D.W. Rodgers March 17, 2018 at 2:30 PM Thanks Keith, 3 syllable line now added. Adding a 44 syllable would be a challange,