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Sole Rider

Sole rider in the cold night air, sky looming as town expands. The silent shuffle of snowy hooves — subservient, rough lands. The cowboy freezes alongside a cheerful amber window. Clang of his rustling spurs silenced suddenly...he’s come for Joe. Cul-de-sac of frontier buildings frame the vengeance of his mind. Whiteness of streets balk at death of the young — simpletons close blinds. 6/17/2018

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Date: 6/23/2018 9:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your great win, Kim, beautiful imagery :) ... Hugs Eve ~`*
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/23/2018 9:41:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 6/23/2018 3:34:00 PM
Kim, such fantastic imagery brings the sights, sounds and emotions to enthralling life in your beautifully expressed poem. Congratulations on your awesome win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/23/2018 4:37:00 PM
Thank you, Susan! Hugs...Kim
Date: 6/22/2018 8:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Well-written poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/22/2018 10:40:00 PM
Thank you, Susan!
Date: 6/22/2018 2:00:00 AM
Wonderful harmony of sounds ... rich visuals ... Congratulations for the nice win , Kim ...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/22/2018 2:27:00 AM
Thank you, Probir!
Date: 6/20/2018 6:53:00 PM
- A skilled and great 6 line poem, from you Kim :) - It must have been difficult to judge, I think everyone is amazing, with different themes - Congratulations on a well deserved 2nd place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne -Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/20/2018 7:22:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 6/20/2018 4:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win, Kim!:-)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/20/2018 7:22:00 PM
Thank you, Edward!
Date: 6/20/2018 4:34:00 PM
Love this one, Kim. Congrats on the placement!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/20/2018 7:22:00 PM
Thanks, Larry!
Date: 6/20/2018 3:47:00 PM
Great six lines Kim.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/20/2018 7:21:00 PM
Thank you, Silent!
Date: 6/17/2018 10:25:00 PM
You've created quite a scene with these lines, Kim. People STILL look the other way (close the blinds) to avoid confronting danger. Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/18/2018 5:47:00 AM
Thanks, Janice! Yes, they do! Thanks, Janice!

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