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Soldier's Last Dance

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To touch the tear that falls upon your heart Feel your silent breath to which I'm wed To know your love, caress its crumbled part This broken dream to darkened path you dread So dance with me and let our bodies sway Across the floor held between my arms Feel the music pulse, for time that won't delay This need to see you move with all your charms For tomorrow I must go, I'll not complain As war has come to pluck this tender soul And hold my body tight as a final claim To pay for time each day I can't control When bombs explode and light the blackest night I'll see your face to calm my darkest fear In man made holes I'll crawl in trembling flight It's there I'll hold this dance with you my dear To you my love this dance a moment sad To me, it is a memory's lasting cry So dance with me as if your heart is glad My eyes and lips will only say goodbye Until such time in hope, I may return Another dance with you I'll always yearn 1/26/17

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Date: 8/30/2017 8:01:00 AM
So GOOD, Frederic. Congrats! Janice
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Date: 8/30/2017 6:21:00 AM
Congrats Frederic, for your well-deserved third placement with this splendid piece!! ;-)
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Date: 8/29/2017 4:58:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Frederick. Sadly, I could not get the audio to play.
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Date: 8/29/2017 3:35:00 PM
Congratulations Frederic . A beautiful poem this is :)
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Date: 2/13/2017 3:02:00 PM
Congrats
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Date: 2/9/2017 11:07:00 PM
A sad and lovely moment! Congrats, Frederick!
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Date: 2/7/2017 8:57:00 PM
Wow first audio /read I've had privy to. LOVELY A wonderful write. ..wondering is it easier or harder to edit audio vs. text? Good Luck
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Date: 2/4/2017 9:59:00 PM
Frederic, BEAUTIFUL, no other word will do, best of luck in the contest, but this is a winner to me ~
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Date: 1/27/2017 7:24:00 PM
So beautiful, Frederic. I really think it could apply to that one contest where you imagine dancing with a famous person!
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Date: 1/27/2017 9:11:00 AM
So sadly beautiful Frederic, well done...
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Date: 1/26/2017 11:08:00 PM
Wow, an impact of tenderness for a moment in time until we meet again .
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Date: 1/26/2017 9:31:00 PM
A beautiful expression of the thoughts and fears of those who bear arms...often it is memories such as this that hold them in the darkness of war.
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Date: 1/26/2017 4:49:00 PM
Maybe it the day, I don't know Frederic, but this poem so beautifully written, really touched me and made my heart ache. I was happy and sad at the same time. Now all I can picture is an empty dance floor. Really well done my friend.
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Date: 1/26/2017 3:32:00 PM
Great poem Frederick very poetic x
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