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Soldier's Last Dance

To touch the tear that falls upon your heart
Feel your silent breath to which I'm wed 
To know your love, caress its crumbled part
This broken dream to darkened path you dread

So dance with me and let our bodies sway
Across the floor held between my arms
Feel the music pulse, for time that won't delay
This need to see you move with all your charms

For tomorrow I must go, I'll not complain
As war has come to pluck this tender soul
And hold my body tight as a final claim
To pay for time each day I can't control

When bombs explode and light the blackest night
I'll see your face to calm my darkest fear
In man made holes I'll crawl in trembling flight
It's there I'll hold this dance with you my dear

To you my love this dance a moment sad
To me, it is a memory's lasting cry
So dance with me as if your heart is glad
My eyes and lips will only say goodbye

Until such time in hope, I may return
Another dance with you I'll always yearn

1/26/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Canerdy Avatar
August 30, 2017 at 8:01 AM
So GOOD, Frederic. Congrats! Janice
Kimathi Avatar
August 30, 2017 at 6:21 AM
Congrats Frederic, for your well-deserved third placement with this splendid piece!! ;-)
Krampe Avatar
August 29, 2017 at 4:58 PM
Congrats on your win, Frederick. Sadly, I could not get the audio to play.
Sands Avatar
August 29, 2017 at 3:35 PM
Congratulations Frederic . A beautiful poem this is :)
Roberts Avatar
February 13, 2017 at 3:02 PM
Congrats
Rodrigues Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 11:07 PM
A sad and lovely moment! Congrats, Frederick!
Roberts Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 8:57 PM
Wow first audio /read I've had privy to. LOVELY A wonderful write. ..wondering is it easier or harder to edit audio vs. text? Good Luck
La France Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 9:59 PM
Frederic, BEAUTIFUL, no other word will do, best of luck in the contest, but this is a winner to me ~
Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2017 at 7:24 PM
So beautiful, Frederic. I really think it could apply to that one contest where you imagine dancing with a famous person!
Smith Avatar
January 27, 2017 at 9:11 AM
So sadly beautiful Frederic, well done...
Roper Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 11:08 PM
Wow, an impact of tenderness for a moment in time until we meet again .
Lawless Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 9:31 PM
A beautiful expression of the thoughts and fears of those who bear arms...often it is memories such as this that hold them in the darkness of war.
Green Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 4:49 PM
Maybe it the day, I don't know Frederic, but this poem so beautifully written, really touched me and made my heart ache. I was happy and sad at the same time. Now all I can picture is an empty dance floor. Really well done my friend.
Rycroft Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 3:32 PM
Great poem Frederick very poetic x
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