Soldier

We’ve laid down our swords
And hanged up our shields
But the war still rages on in our hearts

We’ve tamed the warhorse
His saddle rests in the stable
But his stride still charges our frontlines

Our trenches buried
A soldier never stops his march
It will continue to consume him to his own end 

And all those close to him
Will be his unintended victims
On the battle brought to his doorstep

So we’ve built a war machine
To deliver nothing less than glory
Designed perfection in total destruction

He moves with stealth 
His existence camouflaged
You’ll never see him crumble as he salutes you

Honourably discharged into a violent society
Opposed to his order and discipline
To endure sounds of gunshots and chaos in the streets

Forced to relive his nightmares
Of exploding missiles and discharged mines
Screams of the dying and the agony of the wounded

Staring into the empty distance
He sees the worlds he's helped destroy
Following orders to protect and serve his own

He understands the sacrifice
As he holds his child in his arms
How he gave new life with his gun’s final breath 

Surrounded by loved ones
Desolate as an abandoned battlefield
Missing the lives he's lost...dreading the lives he's taken 

Explosions in his head
Shrapnel in his heart
He's a spear thrown deep into enemy territory

...I salute thee brave knight
For I sleep inspite of war tonight
A war once ended peace will endure, but yours is uncertain

Tribute to the Soldier!
A brother, a warrior...a sentinel...a hero

Thabang Jan Ngoma
07-17-2015

Sponsor: Kelly Deschler
Contest Name: Men Only #2
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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August 17, 2015 at 2:37 PM
Thbang, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*
Ngoma Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 12:45 PM
Hello Skatie...thank you very much...(:heers, Tbang
Wigley Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 1:15 AM
A great work, Thabang, well done! Regards, Viv
Ngoma Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 5:37 AM
Hi Viv...I read something you wrote a short while back...I forget the title, but it was about the how you took over from your old man after he had been a pillar in your life..such a powerful write..I'll go and look it up now in your profile (:heers & God bless...Tbang
Lamoureux Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 7:45 PM
I am impressed! Congrats.
Ngoma Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 4:46 AM
Thanks Richard..I'm working on 'GLADIATOR' - it's going to be a bit more epic and I'm going to implement more heart in spite of him being a price fighter / sport / entertainment for those who've enslaved him (:heers & will be in touch
Ngoma Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 4:36 AM
Hi Richard...thank you that means a lot coming from you...you have a people centred eye / you write with heart...(:heers & God bless your heart!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 7:48 PM
I meant to say I am impressed with your poem as well, you humanized the faceless soldier and transformed him into a brother.
Allison Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 1:12 PM
A very powerful pen Thabang - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Ngoma Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 4:50 AM
Thanks Jan...really appreciate appreciate your complementary words...(;heers & God bless
Deschler Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 1:05 PM
Congrats on 2nd place! ...Your poem was so moving and powerful. A very expressive piece... Really great work!
Ngoma Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 5:17 AM
Hi Kelly...Soldier has been a source of tension since writing and posting it..I'm elated for the win and to be honest a bit reliefed...I never wanted to offend the men & women of the armed forces...they play an ever increasing role in our chaotic world...thanks again for your contest (:heers, Tbang
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