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Soldier

We’ve laid down our swords And hanged up our shields But the war still rages on in our hearts We’ve tamed the warhorse His saddle rests in the stable But his stride still charges our frontlines Our trenches buried A soldier never stops his march It will continue to consume him to his own end And all those close to him Will be his unintended victims On the battle brought to his doorstep So we’ve built a war machine To deliver nothing less than glory Designed perfection in total destruction He moves with stealth His existence camouflaged You’ll never see him crumble as he salutes you Honourably discharged into a violent society Opposed to his order and discipline To endure sounds of gunshots and chaos in the streets Forced to relive his nightmares Of exploding missiles and discharged mines Screams of the dying and the agony of the wounded Staring into the empty distance He sees the worlds he's helped destroy Following orders to protect and serve his own He understands the sacrifice As he holds his child in his arms How he gave new life with his gun’s final breath Surrounded by loved ones Desolate as an abandoned battlefield Missing the lives he's lost...dreading the lives he's taken Explosions in his head Shrapnel in his heart He's a spear thrown deep into enemy territory ...I salute thee brave knight For I sleep inspite of war tonight A war once ended peace will endure, but yours is uncertain Tribute to the Soldier! A brother, a warrior...a sentinel...a hero Thabang Jan Ngoma 07-17-2015 Sponsor: Kelly Deschler Contest Name: Men Only #2

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Date: 8/17/2015 2:37:00 PM
Thbang, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 8/21/2015 12:45:00 PM
Hello Skatie...thank you very much...(:heers, Tbang
Date: 8/16/2015 1:15:00 AM
A great work, Thabang, well done! Regards, Viv
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 8/16/2015 5:37:00 AM
Hi Viv...I read something you wrote a short while back...I forget the title, but it was about the how you took over from your old man after he had been a pillar in your life..such a powerful write..I'll go and look it up now in your profile (:heers & God bless...Tbang
Date: 8/15/2015 7:45:00 PM
I am impressed! Congrats.
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 8/16/2015 4:46:00 AM
Thanks Richard..I'm working on 'GLADIATOR' - it's going to be a bit more epic and I'm going to implement more heart in spite of him being a price fighter / sport / entertainment for those who've enslaved him (:heers & will be in touch
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 8/16/2015 4:36:00 AM
Hi Richard...thank you that means a lot coming from you...you have a people centred eye / you write with heart...(:heers & God bless your heart!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/15/2015 7:48:00 PM
I meant to say I am impressed with your poem as well, you humanized the faceless soldier and transformed him into a brother.
Date: 8/15/2015 1:12:00 PM
A very powerful pen Thabang - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 8/16/2015 4:50:00 AM
Thanks Jan...really appreciate appreciate your complementary words...(;heers & God bless
Date: 8/15/2015 1:05:00 PM
Congrats on 2nd place! ...Your poem was so moving and powerful. A very expressive piece... Really great work!
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 8/16/2015 5:17:00 AM
Hi Kelly...Soldier has been a source of tension since writing and posting it..I'm elated for the win and to be honest a bit reliefed...I never wanted to offend the men & women of the armed forces...they play an ever increasing role in our chaotic world...thanks again for your contest (:heers, Tbang

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