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Something I made up while driving to visit my Dad in Bakersfield.  The original version was:  Solar sails are set, Buttons are green, stores are full;  Asteroid belt waits.   I decided to add some alliteration.
Solar sails are set-- Stores secured, status shows green. Surfing Saturn's rings.

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Date: 5/25/2014 10:32:00 PM
Simply super senryu....I did one called serpents...check it out...Tim
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Date: 5/26/2014 11:50:00 PM
Thanks. I like the one on serpents too.

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