Notes About The Poem
Something I made up while driving to visit my Dad in Bakersfield. The original version was: Solar sails are set, Buttons are green, stores are full; Asteroid belt waits. I decided to add some alliteration.
Solar System Surfer
Solar sails are set--
Stores secured, status shows green.
Surfing Saturn's rings.
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