Solace

The path is rocky That leads me out of the dark And into the light Written: September 11, 2009 9:01 A.M. Inspired by: Raul Moreno's contest - A Haiku on the photo in his blog

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Sharon Winter

Date: 10/7/2009 8:29:00 AM

Lainie! Hi girlfriend! Such a beautiful haiku. Hope all is well by you. Just stopping by to thank you for your sweetest comment. Of course, it is way too kind as truth is you write much better than me!!! But still in all it was a lovely compliment and I thank you dearly. Big hugs to you! Miss you!!! Love, shar xoxoxo

Date: 9/17/2009 12:37:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by and answering my blog question. Your writing is indeed diverse. Of course, that's part of what makes you so talented. Again, good luck in the contest with this poem. Have a good day my friend. Karen

Date: 9/12/2009 6:57:00 PM

What an inspirational view. In in that journey one finds hope as you end with light in this poem. Nice one! Good luck in the contest. Blessings to you. Karen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/11/2009 4:31:00 PM

God speed in the contest. Much thought went into the penned words. Sara

Sue Mason

Date: 9/11/2009 9:48:00 AM

My goodness, you've been making up for lost time today ... LOL ... great to see your writes again and good luck in the contest !!

John Freeman

Date: 9/11/2009 9:39:00 AM

Yes, it always is, isn't it. Good write, Sincerely Moses

Michael Jordan

Date: 9/11/2009 8:55:00 AM

Elaine this is surely the winner - is in my book anyhow - straight to my faves Laine - God Bless, mj

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 9/11/2009 7:13:00 AM

what a great piece, nice for Raul's contest. i love the flow of words. thanks for your constant encouragement. i hope to put up a trbte piece for you soon. I love you, your poetic passion and prowess are distinct. hope you have read my poem tribte to the top twenty super soupers' Love, Adeleke

Krista Kurth

Date: 9/11/2009 7:12:00 AM

Elaine, great haiku and inspiration! I think we can all relate to rocky roads that eventually lead us into the light. Good luck in the contest. Krista

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/11/2009 7:08:00 AM

Such hope and inspiration in such a few short words! Nicely comforting!! ~ Good luck, Elaine!~love, Carrie

Daver Austin

Date: 9/11/2009 6:57:00 AM

Hooray! Elaine is back. Nice, spiritual haiku. Love, daver