Solace

steeped in mundane, worldly desires, blind I am I wish to attract His blessed attention His presence is all pervading, I forgot grant solace to soul. 13.6.2020

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/19/2020 1:30:00 PM

Wonderful writing, Mohan. Love the ending.

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/20/2020 3:08:00 AM

Andrea, thanx.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/17/2020 1:30:00 PM

We are, indeed, 'steeped in mundane desires,' as you so movingly expressed it, Mohan. Kudos, Gershon

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/17/2020 9:35:00 PM

GW, thanx. Hope it becomes a universal experience and humanity lives as equals minus self greed. Best.

Jcb Brul

Date: 6/14/2020 11:39:00 AM

You have sublimely woven a heavenly poem..To my FAVE list.

Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/15/2020 1:25:00 AM

JCB, I had written an extra stanza for the Sapphic contest. So thought of posting it as a self contained small poem. Do read the other 4 stanzas. After contest is over, will merge into one. Thanx for appreciating and putting it as your fav. list. Keep motivating. Hugs. Mohan