Sola Luna

Grandiose and golden, 
Shyly peeking above the clouds 
I regard you in awe
But you stare back so cold 
I personify your beauty 
Though you aren't made of flesh 
For you are simply a stone 
Which floats in the abyss
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Breedt Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 4:31 PM
Ah the moon over Hawaii must be something to see. You and that lonely moon personified. I love this
Goff Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 7:56 PM
deep stuff Ellie...contemplative, nice!
Anne Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 4:47 AM
thank you, James xx
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