Soil, Sky and Sea...

Tough tears drop from heavens’ window
God gives us a sweet sign…the rainbow

Think there are the ground galaxies?
Check out the cute romantic roses

Men once competed on cold cliffs
Fresh fishes now fights on coral reefs
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
July 15, 2010 at 10:06 PM
Very meaningful poem.I enjoyed it
Dietrich Avatar
July 15, 2010 at 9:18 PM
An interesting little poem, Adeleke. So nice to see you back here. Let me see what else you have posted!
Babcock Avatar
July 15, 2010 at 7:38 PM
Glad they were able to cap the well today in the Gulf but so sad for the marine life. God Bless Phyl
George   Avatar
July 15, 2010 at 12:26 PM
Life is an endless aray of extremeties. Wonderful writing, Adeleke and thank you for your kind comments. Love, Lainie
Mills Avatar
July 15, 2010 at 11:43 AM
I like the alliteration in your poem. Quite spectacular words too! Love, Susan
Devonshire Avatar
July 15, 2010 at 9:43 AM
Indeed, the fish are fighting to survive, Adeleke. Just yesterday I heard from a fisherman about a great number of grouper lying dead at the bottom of the Gulf, killed by the oil contamination. We could use some uplifting rainbows here. Beautifully written, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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