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Soil, Sky and Sea...

Tough tears drop from heavens’ window God gives us a sweet sign…the rainbow Think there are the ground galaxies? Check out the cute romantic roses Men once competed on cold cliffs Fresh fishes now fights on coral reefs

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/15/2010 10:06:00 PM

Very meaningful poem.I enjoyed it

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/15/2010 9:18:00 PM

An interesting little poem, Adeleke. So nice to see you back here. Let me see what else you have posted!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/15/2010 7:38:00 PM

Glad they were able to cap the well today in the Gulf but so sad for the marine life. God Bless Phyl

Elaine George

Date: 7/15/2010 12:26:00 PM

Life is an endless aray of extremeties. Wonderful writing, Adeleke and thank you for your kind comments. Love, Lainie

Susan Mills

Date: 7/15/2010 11:43:00 AM

I like the alliteration in your poem. Quite spectacular words too! Love, Susan

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/15/2010 9:43:00 AM

Indeed, the fish are fighting to survive, Adeleke. Just yesterday I heard from a fisherman about a great number of grouper lying dead at the bottom of the Gulf, killed by the oil contamination. We could use some uplifting rainbows here. Beautifully written, my friend. Love, Carolyn