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Softness of a Woman

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Well, this is my first Sijo poem I have attemted to write. Please let me know if I erred in any way. Thanks so much for reading...All the best...Charlie

A woman's touch, her feel, comforts like that of a down pillow As I rest my head upon the smoothness of her soft body, I deep dream By her scent, and by her warm breath upon my neck, I awaken

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/8/2018 6:08:00 PM

Hello Charles, that is a beautiful poem you have created. Have a nice evening my friend.

Charles Messina
Date: 6/9/2018 8:03:00 AM

Hello Darlene, thank you for your kind words! Have a wonderful weekend my dear friend.

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 6/5/2018 8:16:00 PM

Hello Charlie, Very evocative. Not familiar with the form so I cant say whether it is good or not in that way but in few words you hit a nail right on the head. Oliver

Charles Messina
Date: 6/6/2018 6:33:00 AM

Hey Oliver, Thanks so much for the read and kind words. Enjoy your day! Nice to meet you...All the Best...Charlie

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/5/2018 10:16:00 PM

This is simply stunning, Charlie. Gorgeous and meaningful imagery adorns your lovely poetic lines.. Excellent! Warmest wishes. ~Susan

Charles Messina
Date: 5/7/2018 6:49:00 AM

Hi Susan, I really do appreciate your kind and enchanting words. Thank you also for the visit...Have a delightful day dear...Warm wishes. :) Charlie

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/3/2018 12:29:00 PM

In my books, this is an A+ rating! It is such a lovely, meaningful piece with all the elements of an excellent Sijo! I can't believe this is your first as this piece is the work of a veteran! Well done, my friend! Best regards. Pandita

Charles Messina
Date: 5/3/2018 4:11:00 PM

Wow Pandita, I never got an A+ before in anything (lol)Well, somethings (lol) but I truly appreciate your very kind and inspiring comments. Means a lot! Have a wonderful evening, my friend, All the best...Charlie

Elaine George

Date: 5/1/2018 2:00:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful, Charlie. Sincerely, Elaine George.

Charles Messina
Date: 5/1/2018 2:57:00 PM

Thank you Susan...much appreciated...thanks for filling me in with Tim, he seemed very well liked here. I look forward to reading more of your poetry...Chin up! Stay well...All the best, Charlie

Carole Duet

Date: 5/1/2018 2:43:00 AM

Such sweet thoughts and oh what a dear poem this is, Charlie. I love it. FAVED! Soup mail....

Winged Warrior

Date: 4/30/2018 6:50:00 PM

Don't know much about the form...but I like your taste in women Charles lol...that's the form I like lol...great read...^WW^

Charles Messina
Date: 4/30/2018 7:13:00 PM

I don't know much about this form either (lol), but I have tasted the flavors of a few woman in my lifetime (lol). Your flavor, Winged Warrior, is tasting wonderful so far. Thanks for your lovely comment...Charlie xx