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Softly, They Descend

Gently, they swirl in Winter's frigid wind
  No two identical, each crystal pristine
    Tumbling from gray skies, softly descending
        I frolic among them, beguiled as a child



January 14, 2022
Bite Size Poem #32 Contest
Sponsored by Line Gauthier

Copyright © Jenna Logan | Year Posted 2022

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Line Gauthier Date: 11/12/2022 1:25:00 PM Charming poem, Jenna ~ Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 1/21/2022 9:54:00 AM A beautiful picture painted with words! Congrats on your HM, Jenna! Blessings, Kim M Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 1/21/2022 7:34:00 AM Congratulations on your beautiful win. Have a blessed day/weekend.............. Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 1/19/2022 2:50:00 PM a joy to read Jenna, this is delightful:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 1/20/2022 11:06:00 AM Thanks ever so much, Jan.

Edward Ibeh Date: 1/17/2022 6:56:00 PM Just beautiful, Jenna:-) I loved it. Best of luck in Line's contest! Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 1/20/2022 11:06:00 AM Thank you very much, Edward.

John Gondolf Date: 1/16/2022 8:14:00 AM There is just something magical about falling snow. I am not a big fan of winter but I do enjoy watching the snow fall. Nicely written, Jenna. Hope all is well with you. John Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 1/16/2022 9:02:00 AM Hi John. Whether watching or feeling the snowflakes fall upon my face, I've always been enthralled with snowfall. Thanks for your insight. I'm quite well, and hope you are, too.

Mike Gentile Date: 1/16/2022 6:59:00 AM Jenna, in just four lines, you've captured the essence of a magical Wintery scene! Just beautiful! Happy Sunday xxoo Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 1/16/2022 9:01:00 AM I'm so pleased with your assessment, Mike. Thank you so much for your thoughts. Happy Sunday to you, too!

Bill Baker Date: 1/15/2022 4:59:00 PM What can I say, "snow is fun". Nice entry, Jenna, it should fare well. Smiles and Blessing Bill Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 1/16/2022 9:00:00 AM Thank you, Bill. I'm just as content in receiving so many encouraging comments as I am with placing in a contest with multiple winners.

John Lawless Date: 1/15/2022 7:33:00 AM They do bring out the "child' in us. Very nicely written and captures well the joy of walking in a falling snow.... Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 1/15/2022 1:32:00 PM Yes, they do. Thank you ever so much, John.

Laura Leiser Date: 1/14/2022 7:20:00 PM I love how you use your imagery in such a beautiful way without mentioning the actual object of snowflakes, Jenna. Nicely written! :) Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 1/15/2022 1:32:00 PM ahh you noticed! Thanks, Laura.

Mark Koplin Date: 1/14/2022 3:25:00 PM Wonderfully penned, I wonder how many snow flakes are in my yard? It’s mind boggling when you think about it. So many different flakes. Beautiful! Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 1/15/2022 1:31:00 PM It's quite amazing that each one is unique, isn't it. Thanks a lot, Mark.

L Milton Hankins Date: 1/14/2022 1:05:00 PM Simply lovely, Jenna. You paint a wonderful picture of snow falling, swirling "in Winter's frigid wind." A winner, to be sure. Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 1/15/2022 1:31:00 PM Thank you very much for your review, Milt.

Tom Cunningham Date: 1/14/2022 11:32:00 AM Even today I love to see snowflakes falling, haven't had a bad winter for years now but one's due I'm sure. Enjoy your weekend. Tom Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 1/14/2022 11:47:00 AM Hi Tom. They're so delicately beautiful. Thanks for leaving your comments and I'm wishing you a wonderful weekend, too!

Rico Leffanta Date: 1/14/2022 10:28:00 AM And then every frozen flake seeks your warmth and melts away . . . . . Login to Reply Jenna Logan Date: 1/14/2022 11:46:00 AM I feel guilty of their death when they land on me. Thanks for leaving your thoughts, Rico.