Jenna Logan Poet Verse

Softly, They Descend

Gently, they swirl in Winter's frigid wind
  No two identical, each crystal pristine
    Tumbling from gray skies, softly descending
        I frolic among them, beguiled as a child



January 14, 2022
Bite Size Poem #32 Contest
Sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Line Gauthier November 12, 2022 at 1:25 PM Charming poem, Jenna ~

Kim Merryman January 21, 2022 at 9:54 AM A beautiful picture painted with words! Congrats on your HM, Jenna! Blessings, Kim M

Paula Goldsmith January 21, 2022 at 7:34 AM Congratulations on your beautiful win. Have a blessed day/weekend..............

Jan Allison January 19, 2022 at 2:50 PM a joy to read Jenna, this is delightful:-) hugs Jan xx Jenna Logan January 20, 2022 at 11:06 AM Thanks ever so much, Jan.

Edward Ibeh January 17, 2022 at 6:56 PM Just beautiful, Jenna:-) I loved it. Best of luck in Line's contest! Jenna Logan January 20, 2022 at 11:06 AM Thank you very much, Edward.

John Gondolf January 16, 2022 at 8:14 AM There is just something magical about falling snow. I am not a big fan of winter but I do enjoy watching the snow fall. Nicely written, Jenna. Hope all is well with you. John Jenna Logan January 16, 2022 at 9:02 AM Hi John. Whether watching or feeling the snowflakes fall upon my face, I've always been enthralled with snowfall. Thanks for your insight. I'm quite well, and hope you are, too.

Mike Gentile January 16, 2022 at 6:59 AM Jenna, in just four lines, you've captured the essence of a magical Wintery scene! Just beautiful! Happy Sunday xxoo Jenna Logan January 16, 2022 at 9:01 AM I'm so pleased with your assessment, Mike. Thank you so much for your thoughts. Happy Sunday to you, too!

Bill Baker January 15, 2022 at 4:59 PM What can I say, "snow is fun". Nice entry, Jenna, it should fare well. Smiles and Blessing Bill Jenna Logan January 16, 2022 at 9:00 AM Thank you, Bill. I'm just as content in receiving so many encouraging comments as I am with placing in a contest with multiple winners.

John Lawless January 15, 2022 at 7:33 AM They do bring out the "child' in us. Very nicely written and captures well the joy of walking in a falling snow.... Jenna Logan January 15, 2022 at 1:32 PM Yes, they do. Thank you ever so much, John.

Laura Leiser January 14, 2022 at 7:20 PM I love how you use your imagery in such a beautiful way without mentioning the actual object of snowflakes, Jenna. Nicely written! :) Jenna Logan January 15, 2022 at 1:32 PM ahh you noticed! Thanks, Laura.

Mark Koplin January 14, 2022 at 3:25 PM Wonderfully penned, I wonder how many snow flakes are in my yard? It’s mind boggling when you think about it. So many different flakes. Beautiful! Jenna Logan January 15, 2022 at 1:31 PM It's quite amazing that each one is unique, isn't it. Thanks a lot, Mark.

L Milton Hankins January 14, 2022 at 1:05 PM Simply lovely, Jenna. You paint a wonderful picture of snow falling, swirling "in Winter's frigid wind." A winner, to be sure. Jenna Logan January 15, 2022 at 1:31 PM Thank you very much for your review, Milt.

Tom Cunningham January 14, 2022 at 11:32 AM Even today I love to see snowflakes falling, haven't had a bad winter for years now but one's due I'm sure. Enjoy your weekend. Tom Jenna Logan January 14, 2022 at 11:47 AM Hi Tom. They're so delicately beautiful. Thanks for leaving your comments and I'm wishing you a wonderful weekend, too!

Rico Leffanta January 14, 2022 at 10:28 AM And then every frozen flake seeks your warmth and melts away . . . . . Jenna Logan January 14, 2022 at 11:46 AM I feel guilty of their death when they land on me. Thanks for leaving your thoughts, Rico.