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Softly the Rain

Softly the rain falls upon my face your memory I can't erase. Alone I stand now silently remembering how it use to be. How I would caress your face and dream about a far off place. Where we would sit beneath the sun making love until the day was done. But one dark day you were taken from me now all I have are these memories. Softly the rain falls upon my face.... JSergi

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Date: 11/27/2013 6:10:00 PM
Such a melancholy piece, full of deep emotion and heartfelt language. Well done my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/4/2013 6:31:00 PM
Thank you Keith for your kind words
Date: 11/26/2013 11:30:00 PM
Hi New Poet Joseph, once again... .. Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/4/2013 6:32:00 PM
Hey Linda thanks for your kind words hope you have a wonderful thanksgiving also
Date: 11/15/2013 2:37:00 PM
Tender words, compassionately driven with skill.
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 11/15/2013 6:08:00 PM
Mark thank you for you kind words.