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Softly Spoken

Hush Hush He speaks gently I blush slight kiss Under his breath Sheer bliss I sigh my hands reach for his tie Inspired by Nette's contest 'Whispers of a muse ' Emily Romano's. -The Musette form Not for the contest

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/28/2014 4:13:00 PM

This one is amazing, yours are always 7's but this one is also a fav.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/28/2014 4:31:00 AM

very beautifully painted charmaine excellent pen

Paul Callus

Date: 11/27/2014 12:31:00 PM

Excellent Musette, Charm! I will not tempt you again to join the contest:) ... but with a poem like this.....:) All three stanzas are perfect, and finally they all tie up! // paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/27/2014 9:29:00 AM

charms, why not join the contest?... huggs!

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/27/2014 10:39:00 AM

You know how I am about contests sweetie,but tnks for being an inspiration xxx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/27/2014 7:31:00 AM

Charmaine, you need to enter this one. I predict it would recieve top honors, more importantly more people would read it. Hugs Rick.

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/27/2014 10:42:00 AM

Tnks for thinking so Richard : ) But you know how I hardly enter any contests,but this was fun : )

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/27/2014 7:29:00 AM

One of my favorites, subtle and seductive.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/26/2014 8:47:00 PM

I really had to smile when I read the last line. Very sweet poem Charmaine.

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 11/26/2014 7:13:00 PM

Enjoyed the write Charmaine! Love the scene and sense and imagery.Very soft indeed... Always, Keith:-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/26/2014 5:07:00 PM

that last part is SO GOOD. It just shows such an affection at the end there. great job, and it's unusual to see you enter a contest. WOW.

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/26/2014 5:13:00 PM

Still not entering sweet lady..But thanks.: ) xx

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/26/2014 4:40:00 PM

Charma, Very passionate and very beautiful!! Well penned indeed. I think too that this one could've been a contest winner. A definite "7" from me. Best Always, Gary

Sebastian Aaron Baez

Date: 11/26/2014 3:27:00 PM

Not for contest!? Are you scared of being in first place?

Tim Smith

Date: 11/26/2014 3:11:00 PM

Beautiful and romantic...the start of a passionate night....hugs Tim

Jan Allison

Date: 11/26/2014 2:59:00 PM

so beautifully penned Charmaine:-) apart from the hissing lol Hugs jan xx

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/26/2014 3:16:00 PM

I changed the hiss for the kiss and the lips for the kiss. I was going to do hips (under his breath) ..But he cant whisper to my hips.lol : )