Charmaine Chircop Poet Light Verse

Softly Spoken

Hush Hush

He speaks gently

I blush


slight kiss

Under his breath

Sheer bliss



I sigh

my hands reach for

his tie





Inspired by Nette's contest
'Whispers of a muse '
Emily Romano's. -The Musette form

Not for the contest

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Maurice Yvonne November 28, 2014 at 4:13 PM This one is amazing, yours are always 7's but this one is also a fav.

Liam Mcdaid November 28, 2014 at 4:31 AM very beautifully painted charmaine excellent pen

Paul Callus November 27, 2014 at 12:31 PM Excellent Musette, Charm! I will not tempt you again to join the contest:) ... but with a poem like this.....:) All three stanzas are perfect, and finally they all tie up! // paul

Nette Onclaud November 27, 2014 at 9:29 AM charms, why not join the contest?... huggs! Charmaine Chircop November 27, 2014 at 10:39 AM You know how I am about contests sweetie,but tnks for being an inspiration xxx

Richard Lamoureux November 27, 2014 at 7:31 AM Charmaine, you need to enter this one. I predict it would recieve top honors, more importantly more people would read it. Hugs Rick. Charmaine Chircop November 27, 2014 at 10:42 AM Tnks for thinking so Richard : ) But you know how I hardly enter any contests,but this was fun : )

Richard Lamoureux November 27, 2014 at 7:29 AM One of my favorites, subtle and seductive.

Brenda Meier-Hans November 26, 2014 at 8:47 PM I really had to smile when I read the last line. Very sweet poem Charmaine.

Keith O.J. Hunt November 26, 2014 at 7:13 PM Enjoyed the write Charmaine! Love the scene and sense and imagery.Very soft indeed... Always, Keith:-)

Andrea Dietrich November 26, 2014 at 5:07 PM that last part is SO GOOD. It just shows such an affection at the end there. great job, and it's unusual to see you enter a contest. WOW. Charmaine Chircop November 26, 2014 at 5:13 PM Still not entering sweet lady..But thanks.: ) xx

Gary Bateman November 26, 2014 at 4:40 PM Charma, Very passionate and very beautiful!! Well penned indeed. I think too that this one could've been a contest winner. A definite "7" from me. Best Always, Gary

Sebastian Aaron Baez November 26, 2014 at 3:27 PM Not for contest!? Are you scared of being in first place?

Tim Smith November 26, 2014 at 3:11 PM Beautiful and romantic...the start of a passionate night....hugs Tim

Jan Allison November 26, 2014 at 2:59 PM so beautifully penned Charmaine:-) apart from the hissing lol Hugs jan xx Charmaine Chircop November 26, 2014 at 3:16 PM I changed the hiss for the kiss and the lips for the kiss. I was going to do hips (under his breath) ..But he cant whisper to my hips.lol : )