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Softly Sighs the Evening Breeze

Softly sighs the evening breeze of the sea Exhilarating affect it had on me. The soft sand under my bare feet. With a wonderful sense of curiosity I had gone to the sea greet. I love to smell the sea, To be as free as a bee To take in great lungfuls of the cool air, To see the vast blue expanse of the water's layer. The cloudless canopy of the sky. Colourful views of artists, poets, lovers, gals and guys. The huge flaming orb of the setting sun Indeed it is wonderful and wild fun. The evening that went away I was refreshed, delighted and gay May such evenings always welcome me, And leave me in infinite solitude and glee.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/17/2008 2:21:00 AM
Wonderful piece of writing by you, I was beginning to imagine myself on the sea bed. bye keep it up
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Date: 9/21/2008 2:17:00 PM
Nice use of imagery to forward your thoughts in this poem. Nice use of personification in the title which I really like. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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