Home » Poems » Gary Smith » Softly She Whispers

Softly She Whispers

Softly she whispers words of love Gentle, her fingers that caress, Warm, the lips that place a kiss, She fills my life with tenderness. Sweeter than fruit upon a vine, More beautiful than an English rose, Oh, my racing heart be still, You race because it's you she chose. Each passing hour seems more worthwhile, Each precious moment treasured so. When I look into her smiling eyes, My love, what can it do, but grow Entry for Love Poems for Her (That Special Romantic Interest) Poetry Contest Cash Prize Poetry Contest Sponsored by Team Poetrysoup 2/7/2019. Placed 3rd.

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/2/2019 5:41:00 PM

Congrats on your podium finish, Gary. Well done.

Gary Smith
Date: 8/2/2019 5:45:00 PM

Thank you Line. :)

Wendy Watson

Date: 8/2/2019 3:34:00 PM

This was a pleasure to read,Gary. It flows so well and I love the use of adjectives at the start of each line in verse one to reinforce the strength of affection. Congratulations on your placement. Wendy

Gary Smith
Date: 8/2/2019 4:04:00 PM

Thank you Wendy. :)

Michael Henry

Date: 7/3/2019 10:47:00 PM

Beautifully written Gary

Gary Smith
Date: 7/4/2019 3:41:00 AM

Thank you Mike. :)