Softly She Weeps

~ Softly she weeps, with thoughts overflowing, empty, her heart plays the loneliest tune Drying her eyes, a pale evening showing, silhouettes born by the light of the moon Downward her gaze, through curtains now parted, seeking the love that the shadows did claim Why did he leave, she asks brokenhearted, knowing her life it will not be the same Softly she weeps, the years they’ve collected, happiness filled so much more than was planned He was her rock, a feeling protected, stupid, this argument, got out of hand Harsh words were said, the anger repeated, thinking it best it was time he was gone Shattered and sad, alone and depleted, lost were her dreams, it was hard to go on Softly she weeps, the sunrise is coming, tangerine tints, the horizon appear Hearing a knock, emotions so numbing, weary, she longs for his touch to be near Daylight arrives, the morning dew glistens, opens the door, overjoyed by the view Down on his knees, he speaks, as she listens, forgive me, I beg, I will always love you Softly she weeps, tears of joy
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 9/2/2023 8:45:00 AM
I love the happy ending of this emotional poem. Beautifully romantic and very touching.
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Date: 8/22/2023 1:52:00 PM
So Romantic!
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Date: 8/17/2023 5:46:00 PM
A lovely and emotional poem Chris. My son and his wife of 25 years almost let a small argument blow up into something much bigger. Fortunately, they had the good sense to let cooler heads prevail.
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Date: 8/17/2023 1:00:00 PM
a beautiful and very touching poem, chris! i love the way you've turned it around and given us an unexpected happy ending...
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Date: 8/17/2023 9:52:00 AM
Omg. You have to be kidding me. ! I just wrote a poem that I hadn't posted yet with some similarity to this, especially with showing up at the door. I will still post it. But your poem is so beautiful! :)
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Chris Green
Date: 8/17/2023 10:00:00 AM
Thanks so much Heidi. I will look for yours to read.
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