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Softly Sensual

Like a late autumn sun
Melting the frost upon the fields
Her smile warms my heart
Memories of her touch never yields

My heart skips a beat
Every time she brushes near
I drown in her moist breath
As she whispers sweet nothings in my ear

Knowing her in a way
No other human possibly can
Makes me soar high above the earth
Thanking God I am a man


by Joe Flach, written and posted on 8/20/2013 for nette onclaud's Softly Sensual poetry contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/21/2013 11:15:00 AM
A very enjoyable piece... Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 8/21/2013 7:50:00 AM
Nice personification...nice metaphorical expression imbued in this piece
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Date: 8/21/2013 4:12:00 AM
- Melt in your beautiful and romantic poem .... - Good luck in the contest, Joe. - Have a nice day .... continue with your beautiful thoughts. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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