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Softly Playing

Softly The music plays Inside the heart that beats With the wish to excercise in Giving. Not once But with each beat Given to us to love For this is the true nature of Our God.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/22/2011 12:14:00 PM
Good argument for a "mellow" sound. Hope things are O.K. this season with you and yours. Happy Thanksgiving Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/15/2011 4:47:00 PM
Liked the first one better - especially "softly the music plays". Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/13/2011 10:37:00 PM
C.C.D., a very lovley poem...Enjoyed stopping by tonight, have yourself a lovely night ;-) ,..LINDA
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Date: 11/13/2011 6:13:00 PM
* “Though I Could Move Mountains * Understand & Hold All Wisdom * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Caroline * If I Have Not Love * Then These Things Mean Very Little &, I Myself Have Less * This Would Be The Gift Received From Your Beauties * Light Filled & Loving Words * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *
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Date: 11/13/2011 5:33:00 PM
Nice Cinquain. I liked the way you rhymed lines 3 and 4 in the second one; it has a soothing effect. Jim
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