Softly Falling

snowflakes floating down downy feathers caught in breeze ~ helplessly adrift Written November 4, 2022

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Date: 11/7/2022 2:16:00 PM

they were here on Saturday but I missed them! At least I can refer to this.

Date: 11/5/2022 8:42:00 AM

Nice Haiku, Milt, things that float in the wind. Out of control. I like it. Bill

L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/5/2022 8:47:00 AM

Thanks so much, Bill.

Date: 11/4/2022 11:15:00 AM

Hello Milton, Milton you can keep the snowflakes. I rather have Autumn here longer. I am in no hurry for the snowflakes. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/5/2022 11:41:00 AM

Hello Milton, with snow on the ground it makes it hard to walk and drivers to drive their cars. Enjoy your weekend my friend.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/4/2022 1:32:00 PM

Well, actually, Darlene, I agree with you!

Date: 11/4/2022 9:26:00 AM

A lovely winter image Milton and one I like to watch from inside. Enjoy your weekend. Tom

L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/4/2022 10:49:00 AM

Well, I suppose since we have to have it, I'm going to try to make the best of it. It's not all bad!