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Softly, As Darkness Descends

She enters softly, as darkness descends Her movements regal, welcomed by friends And worshippers in temples and homes Acknowledging her presence with songs and poems Sends ahead two angels, to every Sabbath table Hoping to find candles lit, a home ready and able To greet her as royalty deserves to be greeted ~ The Sabbath Queen -- Radiant! -- whose glory is feted

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Date: 11/17/2018 10:53:00 PM
Ooh, well done; I get a great visual with this one.
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Date: 11/17/2018 9:19:00 AM
Hi Gershon, another wonderful write from your pen. Like Chris I found the images to be strong, painted by such gentle words. This is my first read today and I am so glad it is. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/17/2018 10:19:00 PM
Thanks for your kind words, Mike. Appreciated. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 11/16/2018 2:20:00 PM
I could visualize this poem as I read it. It was like an old black and white movie and that is so cool. really nicely done my friend. Keep'em coming.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/17/2018 10:18:00 PM
Interesting interpretation of this one. I'll do my best to 'keep 'em coming.' Smiles, Gershon

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