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Softer Than the Pale of Dawn

Morning was born, softer than the pale of dawn
Glints of sunlight gleamed from pastel skies,
In my eyes, life was a beautiful canvas 
filled with wondrous hues from the palette 
held in the glorious hand of the Master Artist.


November 14, 2022
Bitesize Poem No.55 Contest
Sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Date: 11/14/2022 8:36:00 AM
A superb, delightful, metaphorical short poem, Jenna. Your writing always inspires me, so I always look forward to your latest. You never disappoint!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/14/2022 8:53:00 AM
Thank you ever so kindly for the sweet comments, Milt.
Date: 11/14/2022 6:20:00 AM
Good luck with the contest. This poem paints so well with it's beautiful imagery.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/14/2022 8:52:00 AM
Thanks so very much, Nancy.
Date: 11/14/2022 5:10:00 AM
Beautiful short sweet piece. XO Gu
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/14/2022 5:11:00 AM
Thank you, Gu. You must've read this one as soon as I posted. ;)

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