Softer Than the Pale of Dawn

Morning was born, softer than the pale of dawn
Glints of sunlight gleamed from pastel skies,
In my eyes, life was a beautiful canvas 
filled with wondrous hues from the palette 
held in the glorious hand of the Master Artist.


November 14, 2022
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Hankins Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 8:36 AM
A superb, delightful, metaphorical short poem, Jenna. Your writing always inspires me, so I always look forward to your latest. You never disappoint!
Logan Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 8:53 AM
Thank you ever so kindly for the sweet comments, Milt.
Kaufman Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 6:20 AM
Good luck with the contest. This poem paints so well with it's beautiful imagery.
Logan Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 8:52 AM
Thanks so very much, Nancy.
Jendayi Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 5:10 AM
Beautiful short sweet piece. XO Gu
Logan Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 5:11 AM
Thank you, Gu. You must've read this one as soon as I posted. ;)
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