Softer Than the Dawn

I was awakened when I looked into your eyes softer than the dawn

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Jan Allison

Date: 4/12/2017 3:21:00 PM

oh this is so dreamy Lin, you are such an accomplished poet it is a joy to read your lovely lines:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 4/12/2017 6:08:00 PM

You're such a sweetheart for the honor you bestow upon me, Jan. Thank you very much. ;-)

Tim Smith

Date: 4/12/2017 3:10:00 PM

Very nice... Sometimes the best view we'll ever see.

Lin Lane
Date: 4/12/2017 6:07:00 PM

Aye, Tim. It was always so comforting to wake to loving eyes. Thank you.

Chris Green

Date: 4/12/2017 2:55:00 PM

Wow Lin, this was gorgeous. It was soft, soothing and expressed the comforting feeling of love and the joy felt when we gaze upon one w adore.

Lin Lane
Date: 4/12/2017 3:07:00 PM

Merci beaucoup, Chris. You read me loud and clear.