Softer Than the Dawn

I was awakened 
when I looked into your eyes
softer than the dawn
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Allison Avatar
April 12, 2017 at 3:21 PM
oh this is so dreamy Lin, you are such an accomplished poet it is a joy to read your lovely lines:-) hugs Jan xx
Lane Avatar
April 12, 2017 at 6:08 PM
You're such a sweetheart for the honor you bestow upon me, Jan. Thank you very much. ;-)
Smith Avatar
April 12, 2017 at 3:10 PM
Very nice... Sometimes the best view we'll ever see.
Lane Avatar
April 12, 2017 at 6:07 PM
Aye, Tim. It was always so comforting to wake to loving eyes. Thank you.
Green Avatar
April 12, 2017 at 2:55 PM
Wow Lin, this was gorgeous. It was soft, soothing and expressed the comforting feeling of love and the joy felt when we gaze upon one w adore.
Lane Avatar
April 12, 2017 at 3:07 PM
Merci beaucoup, Chris. You read me loud and clear.
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