Notes About The Poem

Softened Attention

Sitting quietly, breathing in and out Centred presence feels blissful and complete Bliss strobes within let out a silent shout Our vaporised self’s awash at God's feet Time ticks away but we are oblivious Grazed by bliss mists, we feel its benign burn Ignition within is continuous This play is enacted in body urn When life beckons us, we go out to play The game is simply embrace and release To the cadence divine we gently sway Flowing gently as does the morning breeze There being no one here to weigh and size ~ Each breath we take, is imbibed in surprise 13-January-2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

De Beaulieu Avatar
January 13, 2023 at 12:33 PM
Hello Unseeking Seeker, I close my eyes an lay down. I concentrate in silence breathing deeply. Feeling myself in another place for relaxing. When I wake I feel so much better. Blessings my friend. My fav.
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 14, 2023 at 10:59 AM
Hello Unseeking Seeker, you are welcome. Unseeking seeker. Blessings my friend.
Seeker Avatar
January 13, 2023 at 4:50 PM
Thank you, dear Darlene
Lawless Avatar
January 13, 2023 at 8:45 AM
the quantum leap from passive to active meditation.....no easy feat. We sit in stillness to slow down.......we sit in traffic hoping it will speed up......go figure
Seeker Avatar
January 13, 2023 at 4:49 PM
:)
Buhagiar Avatar
January 13, 2023 at 7:32 AM
Wonderful sonnet. Your writing always excels.
Seeker Avatar
January 13, 2023 at 7:46 AM
Thank you my dear Victor :)
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace