Softened Attention

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Softened attention releases tension Taking us to another dimension Not too far away, for it lies within Peace beyond measure, free from thought flow din Where bliss and wisdom mark soul's intension At this juncture, it's worthwhile to mention Silence holds secrets for soul's ascension Make oh hermit, fickle heart free from sin Softened attention With ego cravings out of contention We feel our auric field slowly strengthen All's enabled no sooner we begin Fears and desires fade, to ego's chagrin Our heart’s joyous, free from apprehension Softened attention 11-October-2022

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Becky Forbes

Date: 10/11/2022 6:51:00 AM

Softened attention is a beautiful way of saying it... much prefer it over meditation. takes away the need to "do" anything... thank you for your abundant wisdom!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/11/2022 9:16:00 AM

So happy you liked this one Betty, tried the Rondeau form after quite a spell

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/10/2022 11:07:00 PM

A poem that deserves high allotment of understanding.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/10/2022 11:08:00 PM

Thank you, Victor